Hello lovely readers. Obviously, we are all trying to come up with a thesis about a family story in order to write a paper. Well, my family is pretty boring. However, my grandfather's story is pretty cool. He grew up in Nazi-occupied France during World War II. After a few years, he moved to America to start a new life. He gave up everything to come here. He had not even met his family that was going to give him a room. My grandfather was a engineer in France, but when he moved to America he had to work as a garbage man for a long time. My question for my research paper is: Was Europe so terrible that someone would give up their whole life in order to start over in the United States?
10/17 Revision
Alright, so I am sorry that I don't have your comments in this post. I copied them onto a Word document on my computer so that I wouldn't forget them. Thanks for all of the great advice, though. I have changed my thesis when I was doing research on my topic. Although I want to write about alien abductions like in the sample, I must keep to France. This is my new research thesis, what do you think?
Thesis: Because of German occupation during World War II, the French had to unite together and rise above the occupation by resisting against the German army both physically and mentally.
The structure is good. You could probably add an argument in your thesis that states why they would have to rise above German occupation.
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